Rock n' Roll Queen

First, Welcome to YWS :D , I'm new here as well. Second, I really liked the story, I especially loved the imagery. "The man stood there, completely at ease. The ...

All in all, it's a good poem. A few problem’s with use of words, for ex. "How can I breathe With such strong emotions Smothering me?" You should change emotions. ...

I absolutly loved this story :D It was awsome. Good work

I just recently started writing this story, and decided to post what I have so far, hoping to get some feedback to improve it. Enjoy :D THE SECRET As I ...

I liked the poem. A little repetitive in the beginning, but other than that I liked it. :D

I loved how the animal analogy :) Great song, I liked it.

I didn't get it, but I still liked the art work. :)

I really liked it. Great job :)

I loved how everything flowed together. I really liked this poem. I felt that I could relate to it. Good work :D

This was a good poem. I loved the emotion that came out of it.

These are awesome. I absolutely love the guy, he looks so relaxed. You are really good :)

You have an amazing talent, I love the imagery, and the way you make everything flow together. :) . "Stayed by the space of rhythm and the light that scatters ...

I can see that you have good writing skills :), but you can not copy off of Twilight. It's not original, and in the end, if you want to be ...

"We make no concessions in the darkness: our bodies bare but not barren. They are what we defend in the aftermath. How being alone is still waiting to be answered ...

I loved this. I thought it was funny how the guy tried to accuse her of rapping him :lol: . You are an amazing writer. keep it up